This is the clip that we showed our focus, during the focus group we were also watching it and made notes of things that we need to change. This is what we came up with:
We have decided that we need to enhance the colour on the establishing shots as the ground was frosty on our shoot day.
We also need to re film the racer walking up the stairs and use a range of shots to with it.
We need to film the racer putting the race suit on as we haven't shooted that yet and we feel that we need a wider range of footage.
We need to add sound into the clip to enhance the emotions we are trying to portray
We also need to add titles that include idents so that it includes the right elements so that it looks like a conventional opening that we looked at in our research and planning.
Issues that we found when we were watching it are that the clip is only 52 seconds long so we will use the elements above to extend the length to fit the 2 minutes, we also found that we will need to take the argument scene out unfortunately as it doesn't make sense without having the diegetic sound of what it happening, and we were avoiding having a script in the opening clip.
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